Flash Fiction Challenge: Bad Daddies

Posted: June 18, 2013 in Fiction, Flash Fiction Challenge
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This week’s prompt was to write about a bad father, but make the character sympathetic. I did what I could (though the father in question is probably more of a crappy husband and unfortunate father than a “bad dad”, but…*shrug*) and I present “Father’s Day”:

    Edit: This story has been removed – look for it collected with more of my work in ebook format! 🙂

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Comments
  1. the sci-fi twist of time travel is a good tool to illustrate the perception of an absent father, but the delivery method of a drunk at a bar talking to the bartender doesn’t work. I’m put off by the analytical and narcissistic narration.

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